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Re: Another amazing sunset surprise!
Posted by Daniel H on March 6, 2015, 1:26 pm, in reply to "Re: Another amazing sunset surprise!"
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Run-on Sentences, Comma Splices http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm The first version was - Everyone expected the sun to set, but the sunset was unexpected. I took out the but to make it weirder......... "When two independent clauses are connected by only a comma, they constitute a run-on sentence that is called a comma-splice..... When you use a comma to connect two independent clauses, it must be accompanied by a little conjunction(and, but, for, nor, yet, or, so)". OK, I will stop now, I need a nap
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- Another amazing sunset surprise! - Charles T March 5, 2015, 11:24 pm
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Daniel H March 6, 2015, 3:24 am
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Carol Lopez March 6, 2015, 5:18 am
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Daniel H March 6, 2015, 5:35 am
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Jane G March 6, 2015, 9:59 am
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Daniel H March 6, 2015, 10:12 am
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Daniel H March 6, 2015, 1:26 pm
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Jane G March 6, 2015, 2:06 pm
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Vicki and Robin March 6, 2015, 9:15 am
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Sue D March 6, 2015, 10:23 am
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - KenB March 6, 2015, 12:01 pm
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - KenB March 6, 2015, 12:05 pm
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Daniel H March 6, 2015, 12:14 pm
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - KenB March 6, 2015, 1:34 pm
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - Daniel H March 6, 2015, 1:44 pm
- Re: Another amazing sunset surprise! - KenB March 6, 2015, 2:48 pm
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