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Re: Haiku Poem Slam: Chantli Mare's Tequila testing

Posted by Rafa on March 13, 2015, 9:47 pm, in reply to "Re: Chantli Mare's Tequila testing"
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Daniel your responses are alway poetic ( and wise) but your latest post rings of the Japanese form Haiku.

(a Haiku poem is three lines long, has 17 syllables, with lines of 5, 7 and 5 syllables (the traditional form – there are variations and other guidelines but maybe not required here. )

Does anyone else have some tequila-based Haiku?

Some examples:

tequila amber
warm lovely liquid regret
sad but happy now!

or

tricky agave!
sweetness deceives innocence…
no regrets, not sad

or

fearful of posting
angry people watching now
so what! live life full!

Any others?

(yes, tequila was involved in this post.)

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